Comments on: Not funny!

By: John Jacob

John Jacob — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 14:38:16 +0000

@Mona
[referring to the '101 Do Nots in Screenplay Writing for Real Dummies']
[referring to Chapter 3, Section 4, from line 5]
Never never make the mistake of NOT connecting with the audience. Even though it might be said, if the audience never understands you, please walk over to a private room and breathe really slow. It is advised not to take Vodka at this time as famous Soviet era clowns have done worse.

Practical steps for improvement would require secret meetings in guise of a poll survey and get to know the taste.

This way the key plots might be intact, but the delivery changed.
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In your message you wrote:
“Can you please stop”
I can understand the annoyance that you have felt from written statement. As the comment is a written form of communication, it is at times difficult to convey the right tones set for the conversation. Even in such cases as they arises, it is our pleasure to address such concerns for mutual understanding.

Also in your message you wrote:
“You are talking about me and you think you know me that you make up badly written stories.”
As a part of the Freedom of Irony Movement, that has its origins since the cave men era, anti-Sarcastic comments are widely viewed as a new form of writing. But in fact, in it underlies the irony of mixing complex ideas while weaving the obvious and the counter arguments leaving both sides of the party in equal disposition while viewing an event. It removes one sided views and follows the philosophy of indeterminism.
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In true the Godfather theme spirit: its not personal

By: Mona

Mona — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 13:00:07 +0000

@John Jacob Your comments never ever make sense. What the heck are you talking about? You are talking about me and you think you know me that you make up badly written stories. Can you please stop.

By: John Jacob

John Jacob — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 08:04:32 +0000

You have to live outside the “cubicle” someday. Meet people. Show your beauty around.

Whether you are short, or clear skin is not the issue. Your sister seems to have aped you. So how come the old woman did not know the difference?

Or maybe she did see the difference…in her mind…wait a minute…how haram of her to wear this makeup!…she will surely spoil my child’s mind…oh! what western life has done to girls?!! what is their family thinking? so young and restless…[goes on as women usually do]

By: Meyrick Kirby

Meyrick Kirby — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 07:48:17 +0000

So someone thought you looked younger than you are … well what a hard life you live Mona, a real bummer that one

By: Mike Foster

Mike Foster — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 06:21:33 +0000

As the years go by you will be thrilled to have someone mess up your age…but for now, I can understand your angst.

peace,
mike
livelife365

By: VonShred

VonShred — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 04:50:20 +0000

Aw! to be mistaken as someone younger is good he he he that is if you’re as old as me

By: Pastilan

Pastilan — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 04:48:23 +0000

You should be happy with that, it means you look young and cute LOL. Probably that lady just needs a new pair of eyeglasses

By: Mona

Mona — Fri, 03 Apr 2009 22:42:53 +0000

@yazan She was Arab and mohajabah. I doubt drunk.

By: yazan

yazan — Fri, 03 Apr 2009 22:39:04 +0000

@Kathy

i am not frustrated, i am looking for a laugh
laughing makes you younger , i glade i made you laugh

By: Kathy

Kathy — Fri, 03 Apr 2009 22:27:53 +0000

(Laughing at Yazan’s comment). It is true that later on you’ll wish this happened to you. But I can understand your frustration.